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Three Scenes from the Dojo

Summary:

Three scenes from the dojo; three scenes from Keladry of Mindelan’s life, and three scenes on the development of naginata in Tortall.

Notes:

Once, approximately a year ago, you said you were interested in a fic featuring real naginata. I hope you were serious. There's an appendix shoved in the end-notes, but honestly I could write reams for Kel on the modern naginata competition circuit. I hope you enjoy!

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

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I: Gasshuku

Kel’s feet hurt, an intense burning pain that shot up her legs and lodged in her stomach, making her feel like she was about to throw up. Beside her, Yuki didn’t look much better—Kel could tell by the way that she was just a beat too slow to take the right kamae, from the slow, too-even gulps of breath she was taking. Cricket, on her other side, looked tired but was upright.

“It’s the last day,” she whispered, when Nariko-sensei had gone to examine the form of the girls on the other side of the dojo. “Don’t worry, it’ll be all engi today, no sparring. Not too bad.”

“I’d rather we sparred,” Yuki gasped. “If I put on my suneate, I won’t be able to feel my feet—I can come up with the energy. Another… five hours of basics? I’m dying.”

Kel smiled weakly, entirely in agreement. “But only an hour until lunch. And then we can sit down.”

Her feet hurt abominably. But she had friends, and they were almost at the end of summer training camp.

 

II:  Shinsa

Yuki stood across from her, her breathing matching Kel’s. They’d worked for months on this—Kel had been shocked when Yuki had said that they were bringing over a few of the Yamani arms-mistresses over for a grading, and one specifically meant to allow Kel into the teaching ranks for the naginata. Not even Shinko had a teaching rank, though both Kel and Yuki were testing for it.

The written exam that morning had gone better than Kel had expected, and the teaching section had gone well too. But it was the techniques section that was the most difficult for her, because she hadn’t practiced the naginata with the same focus and dedication as Yuki, or Shinko, or anyone who would normally be looking at a teaching rank.

There was a whole room watching. If she passed, she’d be the first Tortallan to receive her renshi, the lowest level teaching rank.

Yuki took a breath in, and then she moved, and Kel responded. Engi forms one and two were about distancing and precision, the moves themselves so basic that any mistake would be all too painfully obvious; number three had the makiotoshi, a deflection that couldn’t be executed properly if Kel used the muscles she had worked so hard in her knight-training to build. Number Four had a furikaeshi, while five used the ebu to create an opening for the first time. Her six wasn’t graceful enough, and her harai-otoshi on number seven was too strong. She didn’t think her number eight was big enough.

But what was done was done, and she could only put the engi section out of her mind and move on to the shiai.

 

III: Taikai

Hajime!” Kel yelled, and dropped her hands, red and white flags sailing down with them, to signal the start of the match. It was the first Queen’s Cup—after many years of watching other tournaments, the girls and women who practiced naginata had clamoured for their own competition to show their skill, and so they had received. Shinko was watching, in the seat of the Chief Referee for the tournament, while Kel stood in the centre of the field, the head shinpan for this match.

It was Hannah of Queenscove, Neal’s daughter, facing off against Sabine of King’s Reach, Faleron’s daughter. Two more different styles one couldn’t find; Hannah was bold and aggressive, while Sabine was patient and precise. Hannah made three or four attacks for each of Sabine’s, but Kel could see that Sabine was controlling the match. Sabine was holding the centre, and she was just waiting for a good opportunity.

And when it came, the monouchi of Sabine’s practice naginata slamming into Hannah’s suneate with a sharp crack, Kel's white flag flew up.

Sune-ari!” she called out, and she could just hear Neal swearing from the audience. “Nihon-me—hajime!”

Sabine of King’s Reach was the first of many Tortallan naginata champions, the skill of each generation building upon the last.

Notes:

The portrayal of naginata in this fic is very much modern Atarashii (New) Naginata, which was collected and developed most in the early 20th century and broadly taught to girls in schools. There are older, classical styles, but they don't feature any sparring at all and are boring.

APPENDIX:

Ebu: The butt-end of the naginata.
Engi: The first set of forms for naginata, taught from the first beginner ranks. They’re all very short, no more than about three moves each, and there are eight of them in total. They're called "One", "Two", "Three", etc. There's another set of seven forms for advanced players, called zen nihon kata, which are predictably also called "One", "Two", "Three", etc.
Gasshuku: Summer training camp. A tradition, and never have my feet hurt more.
Hajime: Start.
Kamae: Stance. There are six recognized in modern naginata: chudan, hasso, waki, geidan, jodan, and mugamae (for zen nihon kata only)
Monouchi: The contact point on the blade of the naginata. A strike that is not on the monouchi is too deep or too shallow, and won’t get a point.
Makiotoshi, furikaeshi, harai-otoshi: Specific techniques.
Nihon-me: Second point.
Renshi (Kyoshi, Hanshi): Teaching ranks. There are six beginner (kyu) ranks, five journeyman (dan) ranks, and three teaching ranks. Written exams start with the dan ranks, each becoming more philosophical and headache-inducing as you advance. Teaching ranks take a minimum of five years of training after the highest dan-level rank (5-dan).
Shinsa: Grading.
Shiai: Competition sparring.
Shinpan: Referee. Requires a licence that you can only get after 3-dan.
Sune-ari: Sune (shin) point.
Suneate: Shin guards.
Taikai: Tournament.