Hello hello, thanks again! First time someone asks me for my opinion on a story (we should be besties hehe) it would be great to know Minnie's point of view, from the beginning, also her insecurities and the way she closes herself off to feelings, since before Minnie fell in love with Miyeon, she wasn't very open to her feelings, it would be a nice detail, she knows what made her move from Thailand to Korea, the parents could also be involved, if Miyeon's parents accept her, since they wanted Miyeon to have a husband, I also want to know if Minnie's parents accept her, I also like the idea of Minnie moving into the house, how was that transition and how long has it been.
I'd like to see more interaction between the members. Maybe some jealousy? Maybe Sana? Ejejeje🤭, just ideas, hahaha. I hope this helps. I'll be waiting for the next chapter🫶🏻✌🏻
I write for the people who read my stuff! of course i'd ask for your opinions. (I could do with more friends, hahaha). You actually made me have a little lightbulb. Having Minnie thinking over everything from the beginning, making her conflicted about her current relationship with Miyeon. I had the idea of possible jealousy over the tom and jerry pairing , possibly thinking she was just third wheel in her own relationship. I think i want to make Minnie be a bit of an overthinker, have her move because Thailand was too fast for her brain to compute properly, but her parent support her in anything. Including her sexual orientation. I always planned for Miyeons parents to be the unsupportive of the gays, wanting their daughter to have the most perfect life ever and that's why Miyeon moved. I wanted to try and portray that Miyeon's life in Incheon was very lonely while never being alone. I think in one of the chapters i had miyeon confess that she always had/brought home the perfect boyfriends, despite not even liking men. I did want to have some conflict come in, like Minnie's million mile an hour brain and Miyeon's need to feel seen, to create tension that could be resolved by the offer of moving in. Maybe after the intial argument and Minnie's reflection of the relationship from start to present, Miyeon understands Minnie's reasoning and offers the moving in as an option to resolve that, they'd have more time together so they could shower one another in love and understanding, to be able to listen to one another more clearly, to make Riverside their special place.
What do you think of that? Maybe we can brainstorm the next chapter together?
I also thought about incorperating the others more. i was thinking of maybe Yuqi having a sit down with minnie. She is minnie's bestie. but so far we've only seen her ad a goof ball.
I like your ideas, it's perfect and if you have something else to add, you can surprise me, I love that reliability between Yuqi and Minnie, it would be nice to see it here too. I will wait patiently for that new chapter.
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