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  1. Daicy on Chapter 3 Thu 08 May 2025 09:43PM UTC

    Just found this fic yesterday, so happy it has new chapter! It's so good! I love the angst!!

    Also, if I can just suggest something, i speak french

    And while this: Vous êtes en sécurité, allez dormir* - You are safe, go to sleep

    Is true, in the context it does not fit very well, since Kevin and Jean are close (set aside the resentment) Kevin would say: tu es en sécurité, rendors-toi
    (You are safe, go back to sleep)

    In English the is no real equivalence to "tu" and "vous" but in freshness "vous" is really polite and something you would say to someone older like a teacher or someone you don't know. Also, "rendors-toi" sounds really more tender than "va dormir" which is more the act of going to sleep (like you are up and move to the bedroom to sleep)

     

    Also sorry for the long french lesson😅😅😅

    The story is really good this far and I'm really excited to see the rest!

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    1. Booksaremeanttoberead1998 on Chapter 3 Fri 09 May 2025 11:22AM UTC

      Omg thank you so much for this comment

      I am so afraid of writing in French. My mother speaks kind fluently but i can only read and understand a bit.
      Thank you so much for the french lesson I actually really want to get better at the language!
      I fixed it and I am so sorry in advanced for any more french mistakes 😅
      Thank you so much for the kind words <3

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      1. Daicy on Chapter 3 Fri 09 May 2025 11:26AM UTC

        It's a pleasure! Don't worry, I was actually scared to overstep😅
        can't wait for the next chapter!

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