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  1. IHadToLogOutToSayThis (Guest) on Chapter 2 Sun 28 May 2023 07:23PM UTC

    Super cute and kinky! Really sweet. Would love to see Rick make Leo do humiliating things with emotional healing aspects. Some common ideas would be;

    1. Humping a pulshie. Maybe it makes him safe and floaty, maybe it's not enough to do so, either way Daddy wants him to make a mess in his diaper.
    2. Day of Diaper Checks, where, all day, anywhere that they've previously discussed, random diaper checks happen without warning. Bonus points if it's discreet in public, or it happens in the middle of a wetting.
    3. Big Boy Day, where all day Leo wears an adult pull up, but tries to make it to the potty, until the final time, where he floods it and Rick has to baby him up again
    4. Messing, just in general. It's really a hit or miss kinda thing for most people, and could go lots of ways. Suddenly needing a bathroom and not being able to find one, intentionally making a dirty diaper to get back at Daddy, it happening subconciously, being sick and having Rick be a supportive and healing partner even though Leo feels disgusting. Whatever you could throw out there.
    5. Daddy needing a bathroom and having Leo pull open part of his diaper to use. Bonus points if Leo understands why Rick finds a holding person hot, watching him. Bonus bonus points if both of them start peeing at the same time.
    6. Training Potty Time : maybe Daddy needs to time when Leo goes potty for some reason, so he makes him only use a kiddie potty in their bedroom for two days, including nights, so he wakes up to watching Leo desperately using it after holding all night.
    7. Making Leo ask for a diaper. Maybe he was trying to be a big boy, maybe Leo just has to ask permission, but having Leo beg to be diapered so he can finally go, for the power difference aspect.
    8. Leo wet and tied up with a vibrator against him for backtalking Daddy.
    9. Walking Leo like a dog, pissing against trees and all.
    10. Making Leo wet himself in front of a bathroom or toilet, at home or in public. Maybe it's locked or he isn't allowed.

    All of there are just ideas or things I've seen people play with, so I'm not expecting anything. Kudos on writing!

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    1. dead_dove_orphans on Chapter 2 Mon 29 May 2023 07:17PM UTC

      Some of these have a lot of potential! ^^

      I’m happy you enjoyed it :)

      I normally write dark fic, this was a first experiment with fluffy sort of pastel kink, so I’m glad it comes across as sweet!

      Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

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