'He had touched an angel, and then proceeded to tear off it's wings'. I think that is one of the most brilliant and chilling lines I've ever read. With the way you ppresented Derek's thought process and his remorse that line just struck me very powerfully. I really enjoyed this and I definitely think this deserves continuation.
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Brandon (Guest) Mon 19 Aug 2013 01:47AM UTC
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